New Narrative

With our new storyline implemented, it was vital that we compose a draft of what this trailer would look like, quite simply the narrative has been modified so it directly addressees the over 24 audience, in the beginning of the trailer we question their integrity asking them questions they think they know the answer to, which is do they really know who their children are talking to? With the increasing use of social networking.

it is becoming impossible for parents to control who their children talk to and we think this idea will appeal to 16-24 audience because of school based narrative in the beginning, and possibly because they can appeal to the problems the character is facing. Our idea is controversial and very interesting because it raises issues about a child's safety at school, and allows that older audience to think carefully about the types of relationships their students could be building with teachers, and how teachers are responding to their behaviour.